THE 2 THINGS I WAS REALLY HOPING TO HEAR WAS
"IVE NEVER READ ANYTHING LIKE THIS" AND IT SCARED ME INTO THINKING ABOUT THINGS.
DID I GET ME WISH!!! CHECK OUT A COUPLE OF QUOTES FROM 2 TEST READERS
1.Okay first off kudos! I have never read anything like this before. I mean ive read horror, but
this was just off the wall and somewhat real to me. I loved it
2.read it in one sitting and had to read it again it just blew my mind
3.So many parts of this book had me with my jaw dropped, and sometimes afraid to read what was next!
4.liked this scene on the account of it gave me chills all throughout my body. Because clearly you
cant trust Satan not even the audience was safe from his destruction. I did not see that coming!
5.Never have i read anything like this. It is a great concept and what you did with it was genius.
No one can try to do a story like this and top what you have done, and the terror you brought to
me while reading this book.
6.I thought this was written perfectly throughout, I just loved the overall voice, It had an
intelligence which was crucial to carry both the message and the horror, without it falling into
some sad ‘Try Hard’ preaching monstrosity.
SO,.........WHAT WILL YOU THINK?
How do you expect people to want to buy your book when you don't even use spellcheck on the blog?
ReplyDeleteClassy, Jake. That was meant to be constructive criticism. Your blog is the very first taste some will ever get of your writing, thus it should be as mistake free as possible and written with at least a modicum of professionalism. Criticism is never easy, but you should look at it as a chance to improve. I was under the impression that you want to sell books. This is the chance to show new people that you can write. I wasn't calling you out on a single typos, rather misspellings so multiple as to be alarming. At best, it makes you look too lazy to make the effort, at worst, it makes you look incompetent. I am not calling you either one of these things, but trying to help you improve the impression you are giving as a writer. You can either listen to my advice, or once again throw some childish insults. Before you do though, look up Nickolaus Pacione and see how he is regarded because of his reactions to comments. You don't want that sort of reputation.
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